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Dear sirs or madam,

My name is XXX. I am XX years old and from XXX. Currently, I am studying electronic information engeering at XXX university. It is my last year of the my studies and I shall graduate this autumn. I am a very good student, working rather hard with my studies and achieving very high grade. I recently had a work experience with a company called XXX. During the apprenticeship period, I made myself very useful for the company and also learned a lot about the industry too. The company gave me a very good evaluation. I am very proud of myself and wish I could work for your company once I have finished my studies. I am sure you won't be disappointed with what I can do for you company and I am fully confident of my ability to face whatever the challenge or take on any task allocated to me. Thank you very much for your valuable time and patience, and look forward to hearing from you soon.
With my very best wishes!

Yours truly,

Yeung XXX

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Dear sirs or madam,

My name is XXX. I am XX years old and from XXX. Currently, I am studying electronic information engeering at XXX university. It is my last year of the my studies and I shall graduate this autumn. I am a very good student, working rather hard with my studies and achieving very high grade. I recently had a work experience with a company called XXX. During the apprenticeship period, I made myself very useful for the company and also learned a lot about the industry too. The company gave me a very good evaluation. I am very proud of myself and wish I could work for your company once I have finished my studies. I am sure you won't be disappointed with what I can do for you company and I am fully confident of my ability to face whatever the challenge or take on any task allocated to me. Thank you very much for your valuable time and patience, and look forward to hearing from you soon.
With my very best wishes!

Yours truly,

Yeung XXX