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Dear David,
How have you been these days? I'm glad to hear that you're coming to China next month. Welcome to my hometown.
My hometwon is in a very beautiful village, which is surrounded by mountains. And a winding river runs through the village. My hometown is rich in fruits, such as apples, oranges and grapes. We have got convenient transportation as well.
Great changes have taken place here in the past few years. A lot of factories, a school, a hospital and a cinema have been newly built. Besides, tourism has been developed recently. Therefore, we have got a lot more new scenery spots.
Best regards!
Yours,
Wang Ping

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Dear David:
I heard that you would come to China the next month and it's my pleasure to invite you to my hometown. My hometown is a beautiful countryside surrounded by mountains and river with very convenient transportation. Due to natural environment, my hometown is rich of fruit. These years, big changes occurred in my hometown, that plenty of industries and schools were built. So were hospitals and theatres. Besides, the travel trade in my hometown is developing and many tourist spots are discovered. I'm sure you will have a nice trip if you come to my hometown!

Yours
Wang Ping

Dear David
In your last email you told me that you will come to China.I'm looking forward to your coming. And please come to my hometown.
My hometown is quite a beautiful mountain village. It is surrounded by green hills and rivers. In the past few years great changes have taken place in my hometown. Many factories and roads have been built here. A new school as well as a hospital and cinema has been built.
Meanwhile tourism has been developed and many tourist spots are open.
In my hometown it is very convenient to go anywhere and different kinds of fruit are produced here.
I hope you can come here soon.
Yours
Wang Ping