求一篇高中英语作文！

Dear Tiger Mom,
Hello.This is Mr White,a counsellor from XXX Junior Middle School.I read your blog on the Internet two days ago.I don't agree with your idea about your daughter's study.You require your daughter to be among the top five students of her class or she will be punished.I suppose that this is not scientisfic or fair.On one hand,as we can see,a student's grades depend on his or her gift except his or her hard work.Some students make every effort,but can't achieve high grades.So it is not right to judge a student only by the grade he gets.On the other,such a rule may put much pressure on her,causing things to go worse.
Why not make a change? Just comunicate with her and encourage her to work hard instead of any rule.I believe she will make progress in the days to come.
Regards
Yours
Counsellor,White

Hi，TigerMom，
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating syudents and their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude school never be ignored.There are many examples around us.Some all-A student in school have turned out not to be ac successful in society as they were expected.The reason is often that the pressure from their parents alloes them almost no time for other activities.Furthermore,purishment is by no means a wise choise to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends’advice.More importansly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her have more friends and social activities;and let her make takes of her own as we teenagers often do.