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Dear John,
we are going camping on YuLong mountain this weekend,do you want to go with us?There are six people go together.At eight thirty on Saturday morning we are meeting at the train station square.Train time is nine thirty and eleven thirty will arrivial my home.Return time is Sunday afternoon and please bring tents, sleeping bags, coat, water, food and so on.I really hope you can attend.
Yours truly,
Lihua

Dear John,
I'm very gald to invite you to join in our YuLong Mountain camping trip. We have 6 people all together. Please arrive at the train station at 8:30am on Saturday if you would like to come. The train will leave at 9:30am and arrive at 11:30am. We will come back on Sunday afternoon. By the way, please take tent, sleeping back, coat, water and food with you.
Yours LiHua

Dear John,We are going camping on Yulong Mountain this weekend. There are six people. We will assemble at 8:30 Saturday at the Railway station square..and we by train to our destination, the train starts at 9:30, and it arrives at 11:30, we will be back at Sunday afternoon,Of course we need to prepare some camping things for this camping activity, such as the camping tents, sleeping bags, coats , water and foods.And that is what prepare for this camping activity, would you enjoy joining us?
Well,it's late.In the end of my letter,I put my best wishes for you!
Please write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Hua