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我自己写的雀逗告，一定要采纳哦！指岁
The person whom I admire

I really admire Deng Yaping.She was born on June 2nd,1973.She ia a tanlented woman player of table tennis. In 1978 ,she started to play table tennis and take part in a table tennis team.She joined the Heman table tennis team in 1983.She practised very hard and she always didn't give up.Then in 1988,she joined the national table tennis team.sHE won many gold medals in the ITTF between 1993 and 1998.On her way to success，顷明she let everyone believe that hard work was everything.I will always admire her in the future.

Deng Ya-ping table tennis most great woman player at the history, she learn, fight ball with father from the 5 year old, entered the national team in 1988, successively obtained world champion‘s title 14 times; In table tennis circles the world ranking for 8 years in succession keep first,become only continue to hold Olympic Games table tennis the gold medals athlete, get 4 Olympic gold, include singles and with doubles that Hong made up Qiao. After 1997, she successively went to Tsing-Hua University, British Cambridge University and university of Nottingham to receive a training and study, get English professional bachelor‘s degree and China contemporary research specialized master‘s degree; Deng Ya-ping morals committee and sport and environmental committee hold the post in IOC 2002; In 2003, Deng Ya-ping became a staff member of Market Development Department of BOCOG.

A very famous Ping-pong Player
I admired Deng Yaping, just because she is a very famous table tennis palyer in China, even all over the world. she was born on June 2nd,1973, and started to play table tenis in 1978. She took part in many games in childhood, and her talented skill in ping-pong was known by many coaches athough she is not a tall woman. She usually practises for a long time every day. In 1983, she joined the Henan table tennis team, and joined the national table tennis team in 1988. From 1993 to1998, she won many gold medals in the ITTF, so she became a very famous player in the world. She gave up her Ping-pong professional career in 1999(???我不确定，你可以查的), I believeDeng Yaping can hold a happy tomorry in the future.

备注：属于自己写世冲的，字慎返磨数100左右，可参考宽斗的！！！

Deng Yaping is one of the greatest pingpong players in China and in the world. She was born in February, 1973 in Henan Province. In 1978 she began to learn to play table tennis. Later in 1983 she joined Henan table tennis team. She joined the national table tennis team in 1988. She was the best woman player from 1993 to 1998. Though she isn't a player now, we Chinese are still proud of her.