英语作文！！急！！高薪！！

In recent years, some students hold big birthday parties to celebrate their birthdays. I think this may bring some problems.
First , they spend lots of money in celebrating . The students from poor families will feel worried, for they can’t afford an expensive birthday party . Second , they waste a lot of time in celebrating activities which is bad for their study. Third , it may be easy for some students to get into the bad habits of smoking or drinking。
I think it’s a proper way for us to celebrate our birthdays by simply giving paper cards as birthday presents. As students , we should spend our money and time on study.