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题目：We Should make friends online 我们应该在网上交朋友
Nowadays, making friends online is becoming more and more popular. Some parents and teachers think that making e-pals is bad for us. But I think there are many benefits to making friends online. We should make friends online.
现在，网上交友正变得越来越流行。一些家长和老师认为交网友对我们不好。但是我认为交网友有许多好处。我们应该在网上交朋友。
First, making friends online can bring us happiness. When we are talking with our e-pals, we can forget a lot of trouble and stay away from sadness. Second, making friends online can make us open our eyes and know many things we don't know before. Because many friends are from all parts of the country,and even foreign countries. Third, making friends online can make us improve ourselves. When we get along with our friends, we want to show our best to our friends, so we had to try our best to improve ourselves.
首先，交网友能带给我们很多快乐。当我们和网友聊天的时候，迅庆我们可以忘记一些烦恼并且远离悲伤。第二，交网友能开阔我们的视野并且知道亏昌弊许多我们不知道的事情。因为许多网友来自我们国家的不同地方甚至世界的其他地方。第三，交网友能提高我们自己。当我们和我们的网友相处的时候，我们想把我们最好的一面显示给对方，所以我们不得不尽力去提高我们自己。
In a word, making friends online are good for us. Through our e-pals, we can feel happy, learn more knowledge and improve ourselves. So I think that we middle school students should make friends onlines.
总而言之，网上交友对我们有好处。通过网友，我们能感到快乐，销族学习更多的知道并且提高我们自己。所以我认为我们中学生应该在网上交朋友。

recently, it has been hotly discussed (that) if a mid-school student should make web friends or not. in my opinion, this issue can be viewed from two sides.
on one hand, making web friends will help us a lot. for example, if you have some problems about how to visit another city, you may not, i think, get enough information from the friends around you. however, if you have a web friend who is just from the city you want to visit, the situation will become different, and you are more likely to get what you want to get from your web friend.
on the other hand, we may also suffer a lot from making web friends. as most of us just communicate with our web friends on the computer screen, we may not be able to recognise the true faces of our web friends only though several times of talking or chatting. therefore, sometimes if one of our web friends is not a good guy, without enough caution, we may be taken in by him and consequently suffer from damages of money or anything else.
in conclusion, with the rapid growth of our society and our lives, it may be a inevitable trend that we make some web friends. however, more friends doesn't always mean more benifits. thus, i think we should be able to seperate the good guys from the bad ones and try to make the former as our web friends as possible as we can.