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After visiting Beijing Wildlife Park today, I've learnt a lot. First, we went to see the wolves ,which were kept outdoor.In case of being hurt, we sat in a jeep. Then we met some lovely deers and squirrels.They were so friendly that we couldn't help feeding and playing with them. After saying good bye to those lovely things, we watched a wonderful animal performance, applausing and cheering for the funny and great behave of the animals. Finally, we visited the display of those endangerd animals, realizing that if we don't stop polluting the nuture and killing the lives , we will lose more.